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- good choice of title and cover lines that relate to teenage girls 

- the main image is of a well known celebrity loved by teenage girls 

- the colour choice for the background is a very nice fade from white to pink/purple 

EBI:

- the cover lines could have had a wider range of font styles

- possibly more colour could have been used in the title and coverlines 

-  possibly more coverlines could have been used to fill the page